My Game Change

[Lil Drew]

im back on tracks cause my game used be wack cause my rhymes jus look like crap,

so this is why is seem like im getting so betta cause now i spit like a 9mm beretta,

i couldn't destroy other rap emcees cause think i was the suckiest mcs,

so check game now the name is the same look how strong when spit came out,

like wow i never think that i done so damn good like a piece of the counrty pie that came from south,

so check it out my rap freestyles and read my lyrics cause it like map shown were im at,

this is why my game changes into different type of things my personality and the way i spit,

cause my freestyle that i think it is some good shit cause i known that because every body said thta is some good shit,

so all yall know what my prophecy is becoming a go emcee,

i get star working on being a new masterpiece of this game cause this is why my whole game has change alot,

so gonna make some good freestyle and collabs and try to make it hot,

cause aint going to stop my rap game till i die,

cause im going to let it change before i die so for yall u other rap emcees got dream,

work so hard so you can get that dream like me,my game made some changes and i will bring wit me//

[Lil Drew]

come on

[Legacy01]

yo, u got sum good ideas in that piece which i giv ya credit for. jus need to improve on ya structure and flow was a lil all over the place at times, vocab was basic but was a good read... keep droppin n elevatiiiin

[sILLable]

your ideas are ok...but you need to learn how to put those ideas into a more descriptive and complex wording..a more complex rhyme scheme and elevte your vocab some more...all inall not too bad...keep elevatin and droppin.~1~