In Love wita Bitch

[Apostle OS]

Baby the last time I saw you in the nude,
We was in High-school, foolin around up in my room.
Now you so skandalous, I'm in love wit chya bitch,
Wish I didn't have to curse, but you play games and shit.
Flirt when you know I gotta new girl on me,
You stop by to say hi, so why you get so horny?
Don't get me wrong I wanna hit it,
but I'd rather get down wit it than get up in it.
Shit, go on hunny, and do your thang,
Cause he might spit the game but he can't hit the brain.
Ain't no shame, cause I get mines the same,
And when I hit the brain, I get brain from no name,
cuties, thunder clappin wit fat asses.
I drill to spill, I'm strapped but life skills are killed,
Yea I bang like that, and damn you came right back,
High class and price tagged, nice ass in tight shwag,

"Jus a lil sometin, boy, it's only for one night."
Cause I'm in love wit the bitch I always say alright.

Fucked her and left her naked and wet,
passed the fuck out give her a kiss on the head.

It happens every time I'm dickin dymes peices, I wish,
she would let me bone in peace, but hey,
I'm in love wit this bitch.

[MISTA GRIM]

nice drop. 7 out of 10. okay........................................

[MISTA GRIM]

u must elevate no hate.............................

[Apostle OS]

get off the dick its off the top, ain't no one readin my other shit so why not jus put out n e thing. Don't jus open mouth like a bitch.

[Demure]

EZ there Apostle, I agree with MISTA, maybe a little bit disrespectful in some of the lines. The tone in general seemed harsh on the girl. And don't get mad at dude for criticizing. Maybe people aren't reading your other 'ish but that doesn't mean that you can just write what you want and people aren't going to have an opinion. You wrote it (and posted it) and so you have the burden to dealing with other peoples thoughts on it. Damn.

As for the drop, I didn't like it. Flow was off, you kept riming the same sound over and over, made it sound monotonous. Change it up a little more. You don't come off like much of a gentlemen here either. If you're in love with the girl, why the f**k is she a b!tch to you?? That doesn't make any sense. You need to learn what love is, if you knew you wouldn't be saying the things you did. Most of all, you need to learn some respect for women, especially the ones your supposed to be having relations with.

[MADDUS]

^^lmao
naw i know werr you commin from the concept was ight
trifelin skandlous tricks...the bad fa you gurrl...but
i still think it didnt work, flow was off, no real hot lines
and i aint think you really try on this...lookin at ya
statement after ya drop...no hate stay up elevate

[bennett]

all i gotta say iz whats up with the name.. u aint gonna be in love with a man are u ????

[Mistral]

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