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    Hey man, that was a pretty good piece. I could relate to all the frustratin shit lol, and yo..
    it would help if ya didnt put " // " at the end of ya lines.. jus make it more neater n shit, but yo, tha wordplay was nice and the story n structure was tight, keep droppin
    ~1~

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    thanks for tha feed back keep it commin peeps

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