Sensitize Your Mind (Fast) -
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=3348097
Sensitize Your Mind (Slow) -
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=3336535
I just started making beats a few weeks ago...This is my 5th beat, i wanted to wait until i was at least decent at it to start posting beats...I felt this one was worthy enough...Since i just started im open to ALL critique...
leave links and i'll return the favor...
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Fast -
lol at this being better than all of sdizzles beats he has ever made... i dont like the sample much.. but you go it right.. it gets repetative thats what happens when you loop but... i can see this would be dope with the right rapper its coo
Slow-
i like this better, but the drums don't sound right.. they aren't programmed right.. just dont flow right
the drums of a beat is like the heart.. without it the beat dont move nahmean.. dont try to make "ill drums" just try to make it seem as natural as possible.. you should have layered the sample over with a filter to get the bass
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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thanx for the advice, i did what you said and it turned out sounding alot better...
plus i finished the whole song...
so up this ish...
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i think the quality is ass, but you allready know that.. for the rest it shows you have the right potential to make some nice beats..
Artificial Intelligence
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fast
wasn't feeling it
had some potential.....but the tone of the melody, background pads and the voice did not flow well.....sounded off............
slow
sounded a bit better, still the same..........I don't feel the melody at all
Made In Canada
thanx for the feed...
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this shits dope man, i listened to both and it sounded the exact same. but yo whatd you use to make these and whatd u sample?
yeah they sounded the same to me too, but i liked it, the i know this beat isn't a club banger or anything n it's a layed back style beat but the "sensetize your mind" is a lil soft, good beat though, only critisism from me is personal rfeference so good job
thanx for the feed...
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Something seems.....off about it. The 2nd is better than the first though. IMO.
Pretty decent track though, maybe some timing with the drums.
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