I was at and I saw her funeral, and her death but she will live forever in everything…
She Did Not Die
Do not stand at her grave
And forever weep
She is not there
She didn’t go to sleep
She's the wind to blow
She's the white in the snow
She's the sunlight on your face
She's the gentle pattering rain
When you awaken
In the morning
She's the swift bird
A calling bird in flight
She's the bright stars
That shine at night
Do not stand at her grave
And forever cry
She is not there
She did not die
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this was somewhat unqiue yet very nice and simple in which i liked cus it was an enjoyable read but in a way youhad a very devious and wide flow and the sense of feeling in this piece felt lacked and emotion felt not really on point and was everywhere which kinda is a con cus it kinda seems like no effort was in this i mean if you were really trying for this structure koo but at least make it longer a little more to be able to break down the definition and pin point the exact emotino in this i mean yea i understand she is not dead and shit but you went at it real direct and kinda basic you didnt play with metaphors nor did you use kinda a new usage of wordings which is another CON but this was a nice read. that is just my IMO iight...
RTF on my new poem Vail of Dreams.
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yeah, thanks man..
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word man no problem....
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Awesome...a word i rarely use...this was simplicity in it's prime..with a great douse of emotion thrown in as well. I for some reason related to every line and liked it from the beggining to the end and everything in between. I rarely give out praise to a simplicit piece but this got me i must say, i don't know how others rate this piece but i can assure you this is one of the better poetry pieces i'v read and i'v read a lot. A nomination from me but i don't know if the mods match my taste and if they don't then ah well...Nice one i liked this piece a lot.
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thank you man, thanks Alot.
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