i haven't attempted to write poetry before, but i wrote this the other day and thought it was alright, though now i'm not so certain. since i'm starting out i'd appreciate some criticism to help me on my way. i'll try to give feed elsewhere also. anyway...
Another Pursuit
Somebody bring me a camera
I’m gonna find the clearest window
And pray the light’s kind enough
To leave my reflection on the glass
Just find me a pen and paper
I’m gonna make them meet at last
And will my pristine hands
To smudge the words on the page
Get me an eight-track recorder
I’m gonna sit here with a guitar
And hope each of my fingers
Shake as readily as the strings