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blind spit
20 mins
10 lines
orlatmac1
rosu
house rules
blind spit
20 mins
10 lines
the other one i fucked up so this is the real one.
this is orlat's verse ;
Time and time again youll fall, knock you off niagra falls
Put you in the barrel you what its called
We call it Donkey Kong, Super N.E.S
Fuckin with me you better check ya chest
Somethin like a heart attack
You take one step forward and then you need to backtrack
Lets be honest why you frontin, why you stuntin
Ya verse noone ever lovin, never bumpin
Im comin to the UK like im head huntin
Dudes you will always fuck em <------------Hahaha
this is my verse :
dude thinks hes the big dick but hes puttin his life on the line//
you wanna see 12 inches of dick? look at his dick 12 times//
told my homes i was battling he said who you battlin today?//
orlatmac1, how you spell that he say? I responded... w-a-c ->K.//
peeked you previous battle kid you lost it 5-1...//
bitch couldnt bring the heat if he travelled on the sun//
minds gone blank but i still got enough to merk you son//
peeked you previous battle, this kids wack, got served 5-1//
i killed you in the first 2 bars that shit is clear to see//
you need to elevate, yo rhymes are limp bitch..like you be 6 feet deep//
peace, good luck.
upping #1. can we get some votes in please..
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tx
peace
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uppin #2.
come on lets get some votes.
thx
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uppin #3.
come on lets get some votes.
thx
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dude thinks hes the big dick but hes puttin his life on the line//
you wanna see 12 inches of dick? look at his dick 12 times//
vs
nothing
v/rosu
rosu hit hardest,orlatmac1 didnt really say anything, your verse was abit everywhere to be honest, bi of elevation in allareas and youll be on point. Rosu's first bar killed the battle dead
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mmmmmm kate
uppin #4
come on lets get some votes.
thx
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dude thinks hes the big dick but hes puttin his life on the line
you wanna see 12 inches of dick? look at his dick 12 times
wack..but descent.
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nuthin really
meh....weak battle here. you guys had good flow. ok strucutre. ok rhymes. bad punches though.c'mon guys come a little bit harder. this was a weak battle nothing stood out to me soo vote. rosu by a hair
v/r
v/rous
for better punches an havin any attempt to force played lines.
mainly a better overall verse
oltra, you need to be more creative go read LLL itll help with your concepts an bein direct.
rous you had a couple decent punches nothin to special
no hate just elevate
POWER HOUSE INC
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these dudes is mad garbage, u need bars come holla at me. stay in skool, u might have a future. little kids don't belong in grown folk business........1
uppin #5.
peace.
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