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    Bank of Hate.

    Bank of Hate
    By: Cry






    Think of her... but keep belief she's gone,
    keep her memory but don't let it loose,
    just deposit it in a bank of hate, always
    remembering one and never two. Hate her
    song when it plays on the radio, but
    never could you hate her, so you put the
    girl inside of storage just to fake the pain.
    You'll never figure out if she's meaningful,
    or if she's just a mistake you've made...
    a cell in the brain plays receptionist where
    deposits of your all-knowing-ness goes in
    the slot, but when this is processing - try
    not to forget what you've lost. flip pages
    that belong in the back to the front! do
    it just this once to get shit done. eat an
    apple crisp and drink up a glass of rum,
    before you remember alchohol isn't
    permitted to be drank inside of banks
    . If
    you didn't get that... think of it as well
    before you take this drink, or you'll wind
    up stupid and left without the ability to
    blink. when you ponder your thoughts -
    don't ponder long or you'll get caught in
    just an image of a dream, and make sure
    to catch yourself in the act because a
    nightmare is a dream too. you need the
    good memories of her, not just the bad
    ones you cling to.


    Think of her... but keep belief she's gone,
    keep her memory but don't let it loose,
    just deposit it in a bank of hate, always
    remembering one and never two.
    my bench is warm, although made for
    two; it stays cold on one side. thoughts
    chase boards where love would once sit,
    and here's an outside view of the bank -
    can you guess which one it is?




    "Welcome to the bank of all things you knew -
    where you store pain, scrapes, and everything that's doomed.
    and don't forget: remembering's what we aim to do."

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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    bump... fuckin' haters...

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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    Nash, you really hit a note with this poem my dude. It was
    more story telling and had a lot of emotion which is really
    the way to go with this topic. Your take on it was what
    got to me... I was thinking about a long distance relationship
    i had. We split coz this girl couldn't trust me being so far en all
    but in the end wanted to give it another shot but i'm not a yo yo
    you dig??? So this piece really connected and was something
    that everyone can relate to in one way or the other... I guess
    it didn't need all that much imagery and it was at that level
    of that "Mother" piece you wrote not so long ago.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...me-369072.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ea-369043.html
    ^^Great my dude now when you get time RFT this.
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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    thanks, returned.

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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    heads up...

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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    yep...

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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    assshoooollllees.....

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    Re: Bank of Hate.

    more feed?

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