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Thread: My Name Is Black

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    Halleluja Soul Slayer's Avatar
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    My Name Is Black

    My Name Is Black


    Distorted lines embrace my forehead
    attaching meaning to the imbalance
    that lingers over my heritage.
    This life i live is embedded
    by the perception of others.
    An ancestral inheritance.
    .
    .
    .
    I stand here tempestuous
    like a number 8 ball eschewing
    a push into the corner pocket
    of a sordid pool table.
    Where white hails over all.
    A sense of melancholy settles upon
    my shoulders, reflecting the makeshift
    land we dwell upon until the grave.
    .
    .
    .
    My extrication from this apathy
    is bleak, vicissitude is not possible.
    As the ground swells up threatening
    to swallow me into its gaping mouth.
    I fell down on my knees
    clutching my chest and looking at
    the heavens for deliverance. My lips
    quivered as a voice invaded my head.
    Pounding harder and harder
    with every pump of my ventricles.
    .
    .
    .
    "Lord bestow me with the life
    that I deserve, please!"

    The voice became loud and reverential

    God- "Son, you had no choice over
    your family nor how you were
    raised up or even your race but,
    there comes a time when
    every man has a choice
    to make. Which is to determine
    how his life turns out".
    Life is all but a "Swing"
    Last edited by Soul Slayer; May 30th, 2008 at 02:21 AM

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    Re: My Name Is Black

    Uppin. Lets see

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    Re: My Name Is Black

    Some feedback would be really nice

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    Re: My Name Is Black

    Life must be funny in the States. Africa is good, I see, everytime i read such a piece. Its still hard to feel like part of evrything that happens around but at least back here the alienation for me is from the inside.

    I liked your opening lines. Its very important in a poem.Actually the whole 1st stanza was good and it got me to read the whole pice and it was worth the effort. Bless. Nice 1 Science.

    peep this one;


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-368821.html

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    Re: My Name Is Black

    Thank you man... I guess everyone is away

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    Re: My Name Is Black

    Thank you man... I guess everyone is away

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    Re: My Name Is Black

    uppin

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