Krucial Capone .vs. Turn My Swag On

[Jackie Moon]

omgers^^ up 3. or 2.

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

damn this site is dead
can mufuckas vote......atleast?

[LastREALNigga08]

several options bout to fail u, force u to a last route,
i aint talkin bout Buffie The Body when i say u ass'd out.
^nahhh aint feelin it.

keep thinkin we pussies,til ya blood leaks thick n it gushes,
i appreciate nature,so ill leave this prick in tha bushes.
^below average.

yo style sucks big dick,n it never will gag,
but yall,i dun smoked bunk that was better than SWAG.
(DAMN U GARBAGE)
^below average again... try n get more creative/complex with ya punches..

all diffrent men turn fag if they soft in the chin,
why need 5? 2 of em make u not wanna log in again.
^not really feelin' it again brah...

no man can stop the Beast,ima twister nearing fast,
n get rid of this fake,i call that dissapearing acts.
^best bar you had...

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Swags Verse:


^that's when i knew i won the battle, ur not known for razzle and dazzle, dude.
ugly monkey, "turn yo swag off"? drop the yo swag n that's how girls view u.
^lil personal 1st line, 2nd line aint really feelin.. but average.

broke bastard, type to wait in the front of lunch line and ask for change n'shit.
poor bitch,
couldnt afford to buy a hat, if i flip his last name and but a dollar between it.
^haha, ite...

u aint a beast i don't respect that fake act of being tuff.
WELL OVER 170 WINS.........and a million losses to add up.
^haha, ok.

a dumb kid, i see no future in him, if i was the guy from dead zone, avidently,
you couldnt put an extreme importance in this forum if u spelled ur name correctly.
^nahh

i don't even need to drop ten, like fat girls losing weight, ur not in my range
i mention ur destitute,
u only want to drop 4 bars, so u could chilled at one n ask for change.
^not great closer, but decent..

V- Turn My Swag On

Kinda one sided... Krucial Capone you jus gotta work on ya shit, take more time... set it up a bit better... you dig?

if u niggaz can, can u niggaz vote in my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-392382.html

ite good looks. stay up

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

i feel u
ima start being more complex
i underestimate yall a bit
but 1 thing i see is people on here dont value multy syllables
that weird to me
but i feel u fam

[Agony.]

several options bout to fail u, force u to a last route,
i aint talkin bout Buffie The Body when i say u ass'd out.
-meh

keep thinkin we pussies,til ya blood leaks thick n it gushes,
i appreciate nature,so ill leave this prick in tha bushes.
-weak

yo style sucks big dick,n it never will gag,
but yall,i dun smoked bunk that was better than SWAG.
(DAMN U GARBAGE)
-lmao

all diffrent men turn fag if they soft in the chin,
why need 5? 2 of em make u not wanna log in again.
-lol okish

no man can stop the Beast,ima twister nearing fast,
n get rid of this fake,i call that dissapearing acts.
-could have been dope..so short



vs


that's when i knew i won the battle, ur not known for razzle and dazzle, dude.
ugly monkey, "turn yo swag off"? drop the yo swag n that's how girls view u.
-lmao ok

broke bastard, type to wait in the front of lunch line and ask for change n'shit.
poor bitch,
couldnt afford to buy a hat, if i flip his last name and but a dollar between it.
-lol okish

u aint a beast i don't respect that fake act of being tuff.
WELL OVER 170 WINS.........and a million losses to add up.
-weak

a dumb kid, i see no future in him, if i was the guy from dead zone, avidently,
you couldnt put an extreme importance in this forum if u spelled ur name correctly.
-decent

i don't even need to drop ten, like fat girls losing weight, ur not in my range
i mention ur destitute,
u only want to drop 4 bars, so u could chilled at one n ask for change
-not feelnig this closer



Overall: weak battle both still need to elevate some more... Punches could have hit harder...and try adding better multies...both elevate though

vote =swag


better verse

[..Compa..]

Turn My Swag On

^that's when i knew i won the battle, ur not known for razzle and dazzle, dude.
ugly monkey, "turn yo swag off"? drop the yo swag n that's how girls view u.
..ok-ish opener..

broke bastard, type to wait in the front of lunch line and ask for change n'shit.
poor bitch,
couldnt afford to buy a hat, if i flip his last name and but a dollar between it
..lol decent..

u aint a beast i don't respect that fake act of being tuff.
WELL OVER 170 WINS.........and a million losses to add up.
..ok personal attempt could of been way better though..

a dumb kid, i see no future in him, if i was the guy from dead zone, avidently,
you couldnt put an extreme importance in this forum if u spelled ur name correctly.
..ok..

i don't even need to drop ten, like fat girls losing weight, ur not in my range
i mention ur destitute,
u only want to drop 4 bars, so u could chilled at one n ask for change.
..OK closer..


Krucial Capone

several options bout to fail u, force u to a last route,
i aint talkin bout Buffie The Body when i say u ass'd out.
..got what you tried to do Ok opener..


keep thinkin we pussies,til ya blood leaks thick n it gushes,
i appreciate nature,so ill leave this prick in tha bushes.
..not bad just the wording could of helped better..


yo style sucks big dick,n it never will gag,
but yall,i dun smoked bunk that was better than SWAG.
(DAMN U GARBAGE)
..ok nameplay attempt..

all diffrent men turn fag if they soft in the chin,
why need 5? 2 of em make u not wanna log in again.
..ha ok..

no man can stop the Beast,ima twister nearing fast,
n get rid of this fake,i call that dissapearing acts.
..naw weak closer..


overall vote- [/b]Turn my swag off[/b] not one-side in my view just swag had a more constant verse, capone you got good multies just gotta put more harder punches on em' and i understand what site your use to cuz i been in one of those but here it's more different man, keep at it though

[Jackie Moon]

.3.3.3.3.3..33.3.3.

[Notez]

i cant vote yet but heres what i think

several options bout to fail u, force u to a last route,
i aint talkin bout Buffie The Body when i say u ass'd out.
MEh....kinda lame
keep thinkin we pussies,til ya blood leaks thick n it gushes,
i appreciate nature,so ill leave this prick in tha bushes.
?? thats kind of a oxy moron..you owuldnt detroy nature by puttin him in it would u?
yo style sucks big dick,n it never will gag,
but yall,i dun smoked bunk that was better than SWAG.
(DAMN U GARBAGE)
?? nah
all diffrent men turn fag if they soft in the chin,
why need 5? 2 of em make u not wanna log in again.
no
no man can stop the Beast,ima twister nearing fast,
n get rid of this fake,i call that dissapearing acts.
ok....a decent line but still not good

Not hatin....but work on punches bro...flow was there but it lacked Pow

Vrs.

^that's when i knew i won the battle, ur not known for razzle and dazzle, dude.
ugly monkey, "turn yo swag off"? drop the yo swag n that's how girls view u.
lol. not a very good opener tho worded weird
broke bastard, type to wait in the front of lunch line and ask for change n'shit.
poor bitch,
couldnt afford to buy a hat, if i flip his last name and but a dollar between it.
meh...ok i guess
u aint a beast i don't respect that fake act of being tuff.
WELL OVER 170 WINS.........and a million losses to add up
lol.
a dumb kid, i see no future in him, if i was the guy from dead zone, avidently,
you couldnt put an extreme importance in this forum if u spelled ur name correctly.
Wondering On the Rhyming of those two last words?...but funny
i don't even need to drop ten, like fat girls losing weight, ur not in my range
i mention ur destitute,
u only want to drop 4 bars, so u could chilled at one n ask for change
no..........

Swag Would GMV.......

Swag WOrk On that structure........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-392650.html