BAMBINO Vs. LASTREALNIGGA08

[LastREALNigga08]

[QUOTE=-Prime-]

masterbation rocks
I tried going without it, I couldnt.

...wow...

Now, !.Lets Put Him To Sleep.!

Mannn, This Nigga Is A Sucka, "MASTERBATION" With A Rubba..
He's Equivalent To "Babe Ruth"(bambino)...
....I'm Talking Tha Choclate Bar Mutha Fucka!!
So Bring Ya Daddy In The Room, & I'll Take It Even Farther..
Like Reynolds[Ryan], I'll Be 'Smokin' Ace' & His Mutha Fuckin' Father..

3 bars
house rules.
1 hour to post after check.

3 Bars?!?!?, Thats It... "Babe" Must Be Just Looking For A "Grand Slam"..
Well This Aint Baseball... & I Ain't Dennys.. So U Shit Outta Luck Man..
Cause If I Lose, I'll Kill Myself Come Back & Feed Him With The Lead..
You Must Think I'm A 1920's Pitcher..
The Way I'm Throwin' These Lines Over 'Bambinos' Head..
Gotta Problem With "Sultan of Swat"...I Got The Answer..
How To Take 'Bambino' Out..??
..Just Gotta Give 'em Lung Cancer!!
[Babe Ruth Died From Lung Cancer]

R.I.P.

[Ace Bambino]

wow it took you some years good shit though made me laugh.


upping

[LastREALNigga08]

^i wrote that shit yesterday in like 30... i was jus waiting for you... & i jus came home from school so i dropped it...

[..Compa..]

LastREALNigga08

Mannn, This Nigga Is A Sucka, "MASTERBATION" With A Rubba..
He's Equivalent To "Babe Ruth"(bambino)...
....I'm Talking Tha Choclate Bar Mutha Fucka!!
..kinda made me laugh could of been worded better on the personal so it would of hit harder but OK opener..

So Bring Ya Daddy In The Room, & I'll Take It Even Farther..
Like Reynolds[Ryan], I'll Be 'Smokin' Ace' & His Mutha Fuckin' Father..
..Meh-ish..


3 Bars?!?!?, Thats It... "Babe" Must Be Just Looking For A "Grand Slam"..
Well This Aint Baseball... & I Ain't Dennys.. So U Shit Outta Luck Man..
..OK ,metas just wasn't as hard though..

Cause If I Lose, I'll Kill Myself Come Back & Feed Him With The Lead..
You Must Think I'm A 1920's Pitcher..
The Way I'm Throwin' These Lines Over 'Bambinos' Head..
..lol now this was nice in my opinion..

Gotta Problem With "Sultan of Swat"...I Got The Answer..
How To Take 'Bambino' Out..??
..Just Gotta Give 'em Lung Cancer!!
..OK-ish closer not bad on the personal attempt..


Ace Bambino

Define real nigga....... I'll wait. I figured you couldnt relate.
you get around some real niggas. You discombobulated. Need ace to translate??
..meh i saw what you tried to do but the wording is of not really feeling this opener..


Lastrealnigga"08"?? check ya calender my dude its 2009
3-D punchlines jump out ya screen like my bloody valentine.
..had a good concept just didnt hit as hard..


on your knees please pause the lip lock and just give me my praise.
easy work, tow edge tounge carve dis pussy nigga like fish fillets.
..naw, the wording is a bit off man, and the meta punch not really working here..


No weight to drop off , but such-like bulimic model bitches you quick to lose
battered and bruised, repeated textual violence. Like beat up wives Ill leave you just as confused.
..meh-ish the wording is just off again it takes away your punch man..


Your rhymes are frail, This Battles done, SO ima throw you this L.
Roll it up if you want, I got some mo just run back to cartel
..naw weak closer..


overall vote- LastREALNigga08 well not that bad or weak of a battle but LRN was showing more better attempts in my view, also came more personal, but i saw both had good metas just gotta connect more on a better punch or make either funnier or harsher, keep at it ya

[LastREALNigga08]

^alright good looks..

1-0 (me)..

upping for votes!!

[Suicide Manual]

LastREALNigga08

Mannn, This Nigga Is A Sucka, "MASTERBATION" With A Rubba..
He's Equivalent To "Babe Ruth"(bambino)...
....I'm Talking Tha Choclate Bar Mutha Fucka!!
..okish

So Bring Ya Daddy In The Room, & I'll Take It Even Farther..
Like Reynolds[Ryan], I'll Be 'Smokin' Ace' & His Mutha Fuckin' Father..
..ehh


3 Bars?!?!?, Thats It... "Babe" Must Be Just Looking For A "Grand Slam"..
Well This Aint Baseball... & I Ain't Dennys.. So U Shit Outta Luck Man..
..not hard

Cause If I Lose, I'll Kill Myself Come Back & Feed Him With The Lead..
You Must Think I'm A 1920's Pitcher..
The Way I'm Throwin' These Lines Over 'Bambinos' Head..
..lol

Gotta Problem With "Sultan of Swat"...I Got The Answer..
How To Take 'Bambino' Out..??
..Just Gotta Give 'em Lung Cancer!!
..nahh


Ace Bambino

Define real nigga....... I'll wait. I figured you couldnt relate.
you get around some real niggas. You discombobulated. Need ace to translate??
..meh

Lastrealnigga"08"?? check ya calender my dude its 2009
3-D punchlines jump out ya screen like my bloody valentine.
..nahh


on your knees please pause the lip lock and just give me my praise.
easy work, tow edge tounge carve dis pussy nigga like fish fillets.
..nah
No weight to drop off , but such-like bulimic model bitches you quick to lose
battered and bruised, repeated textual violence. Like beat up wives Ill leave you just as confused.
..nope
Your rhymes are frail, This Battles done, SO ima throw you this L.
Roll it up if you want, I got some mo just run back to cartel
.. weak closer..


overall vote- LastREALNigga08
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[LastREALNigga08]

thanks ... 2-0 (me)...

& i can't return the vote or i would vote in the battle.

[LastREALNigga08]

upping (fourth up)

[LastREALNigga08]

upping (last up)

VOTE UP!!

[Kontext]

LastREALNigga08

Mannn, This Nigga Is A Sucka, "MASTERBATION" With A Rubba..
He's Equivalent To "Babe Ruth"(bambino)...
....I'm Talking Tha Choclate Bar Mutha Fucka!!
decent...couldv'e been worded better but i gave you credit for w/p

So Bring Ya Daddy In The Room, & I'll Take It Even Farther..
Like Reynolds[Ryan], I'll Be 'Smokin' Ace' & His Mutha Fuckin' Father..
nah...Dont make them expo shits in ya verse...just keep it clean and let the readers catch it aiight..


3 Bars?!?!?, Thats It... "Babe" Must Be Just Looking For A "Grand Slam"..
Well This Aint Baseball... & I Ain't Dennys.. So U Shit Outta Luck Man..
no

Cause If I Lose, I'll Kill Myself Come Back & Feed Him With The Lead..
You Must Think I'm A 1920's Pitcher..
The Way I'm Throwin' These Lines Over 'Bambinos' Head..
no

Gotta Problem With "Sultan of Swat"...I Got The Answer..
How To Take 'Bambino' Out..??
..Just Gotta Give 'em Lung Cancer!!
..nah son


Ace Bambino

Define real nigga....... I'll wait. I figured you couldnt relate.
you get around some real niggas. You discombobulated. Need ace to translate??
Nope....just whack and you didnt diss him....now i just kno you bilingual stupid

Lastrealnigga"08"?? check ya calender my dude its 2009
3-D punchlines jump out ya screen like my bloody valentine.
nooo


on your knees please pause the lip lock and just give me my praise.
easy work, tow edge tounge carve dis pussy nigga like fish fillets.
WTF....Hell No

No weight to drop off , but such-like bulimic model bitches you quick to lose
battered and bruised, repeated textual violence. Like beat up wives Ill leave you just as confused.
OMG

Your rhymes are frail, This Battles done, SO ima throw you this L.
Roll it up if you want, I got some mo just run back to cartel
Damn son...you are whack... i would give you tips but there is no hope foryou

Im gonna vote because i actually sat here and read this shit....but battles in FL need to get voted on......so take your time and get BETTER before you guys battle again i dont wanna see 3-4 battles like this shit being set everyday....make it witty you guys arent bad but ya rappin like its audio....so just peep some battles in LLL or sumthin and step ya game up

Now to the voting....LastRealNigga

[Jackie Moon]

Cause If I Lose, I'll Kill Myself Come Back & Feed Him With The Lead..
You Must Think I'm A 1920's Pitcher..
The Way I'm Throwin' These Lines Over 'Bambinos' Head..

Vs.

Nothing

v/lRN

was a weak battle

but lrn had that bar that outshined any other bar i saw in this battle
lrn just keep it to a max of 2 bars dissing ur opponenets name ur verse got boring half way in, and BAMBino just continue to rhyme wittyness will come with practice read some old LLL battles you'll understand how punches should be worded n clever.