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    You've Earned a Custom Title! l^l Osiris l^l's Avatar
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    -=The Blacc Mamba=-

    this is my introduction to this site.. ima little rusty but ima try and go in on this... chec it

    dance to the most poisonous blacc mamba/
    venoms like hot lava that sinks in ya skin, comma/
    your karma my flow conquers keep your posture/
    you cant cuz i graft artifacts through they armor//
    in rational time fragments travellin through anatomy/
    veins clogged i batter beats and shatter feats/
    potion leaks spoken deep through poet cheeks//
    coastal sheets my motions are slow but sheek/
    i strike like cobra teeth, mics disposed and reaped//
    read em and weep when u c the text totted keyz/
    i choke emcees, glands spit the poison u poised in paralysis//
    taking challengers, the alpha male caliber characters fangs sink deeper then excaliber/
    no rattler, head, batter-up, sicc battler lettin these foes drown im the land paddler/
    imagine the, venom that travels up//
    stomach strains after a artery burst ya matter flux/
    cold-blooded control luggage, its a controlled substance/
    in short periods shortage of breath slitherin justice//

    trust it.. i burn the mic... osiris the guiding light... rhymes excite a dyke to turn to a straighter life...haha im out

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    /c]Kid L V.S Kenyonne[/c
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    Re: -=The Blacc Mamba=-

    Not really bad..actually pretty good considering you said you were rusty..kinda creative...nice lil flow...multi's...i love multi's..lol

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    Re: -=The Blacc Mamba=-

    good shit....i was kinda weak but you said you were rusty so i expect better next time..good multi's but it going towards the ending it seemed like it was pointless,like you just decided to put anything in..and just to let you know you need links to 2 other open mics you left feed on.this site is kinda strict on that
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    Re: -=The Blacc Mamba=-

    I liked the solid flow and abstractness of the direction of it
    Rhyme scheme was sick too
    You could have used more concepts on the topic though
    You brought up your fangs and teeth and how you were a snake
    too many times.....I think that was established from the get go
    Keep droppin n you'll shake all the rust off...I'm in that mode right now
    Except maybe I'm dropping too much...keep seeing my name everywhere

    lol


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    Re: -=The Blacc Mamba=-

    no links. closed.

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