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    Braindead

    This is my first verse to a song I did called Braindead:

    I can make the smartest look retarded even far as braindead
    Knowledge is power but truth is what still runs blood red
    Truth ignored by the feds fed with illogic instead
    But puttin' it to bed won't get it to rest
    Like stabbin' me to death still won't see me dead
    I'll live in your head like a tapeworm in your meds
    Tear your teachings to shreads only shit what your fed
    Wipe your ass non-lubricating of the raping again
    Obama wants me dead and not for killing his puppy
    That smile screams you don't love Exposing lies of the country
    Corruption services hunt me Twin Towers self-destructing
    Left hungry but it won't self destruct me
    These demons try to touch me want my dreams to be nothing
    I'm just an ant to this world but not a things gonna crush me
    Terrorist mentality leaves nothing for trusting
    Keep my back to the world leave it dead and disgusting
    Has me Wonderin' if somethings gonna sneak up and cut me
    Like poor people hunting when there desperate for money
    See us turnin' into bears that are killin' for honey
    Like Obama on Leno this isn't time to be funny
    Struck by Me Against The World no matter what it won't love me
    This braindead universe is it even worth something
    To live and breath that's my only one thing
    Made me a monster turned me to nothing

    I know this is probably no were some of the people levels on here but still tell me what you think

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    Re: Braindead

    get your 2 links or this'll be closed next time I pass through

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    Re: Braindead

    I'm sure it sounds nice on a song... What you could do is upload athe beat to that or sumfin...The content was ok but i feel that the wordplay was decent. I saw some internal rhymes which made the floe live but i would have liked to see some intergrated language here my dude. All in all good piece

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    Re: Braindead

    Quote Originally Posted by Scientific View Post
    I'm sure it sounds nice on a song... What you could do is upload athe beat to that or sumfin...The content was ok but i feel that the wordplay was decent. I saw some internal rhymes which made the floe live but i would have liked to see some intergrated language here my dude. All in all good piece
    Hey thanks. It does sound a lot better recorded. I'll see if I can post that up but my other 2 verses kinda bring the song down IMO so I only put on the first verse. And yeah I know I do sound kinda basic intergrated language has never been my strong point.

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    Re: Braindead

    Quote Originally Posted by Cry View Post
    get your 2 links or this'll be closed next time I pass through
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...re-400195.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...gs-399994.html

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    Re: Braindead

    thank you. give better/longer feedback next time tho.


    likes/dislikes.. that type of shit.

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