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    ACE A.K.A. HOSS-STYLE Ace_of_Fenix's Avatar
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    Late nite thots

    I think u guys are gonna learn everything i put on here is off the top of my head i swear nuthin is written hell it mite be obvious lol

    At nite I get paranoid i swear sumbodys watchin me/
    is it the feds from pushin weight or niggas gettin bak for the roberies/
    did too much dirt already and i aint even 21 i dont even know/
    I guess thats y I'm a ace sum put me high but society puts me low/
    sumtimes i feel like the shit i've done them niggas dont deserve it/
    other times i sit and laugh like that shit was picture perfect/
    lost so many soldiers to this senseless war/
    shuda treated her like a lady and not a witless whore/
    I think somebodies creepin on the other side of my door/
    If I go O well I'm jus another statistic/
    my mind wuda got me anyway so fuckin sadistic/
    wasnt ready for life sumbody shuda warned me/
    jus bumpin tupac how long will they mourn me/
    been seen as everything from a amazin nigga to a crook/
    along wit that been called every name in the book/
    those who said it in my presence got dealt wit quickly/
    wonder if others say it behind my bak then turn around and fuck wit me/
    Cops never had the evidence yet they talk like they gonna convict me/
    pay em no mind my nigga u aint guilty/
    talkin to myself now fuck i gotta be loosin it/
    pistol in my hand and im really thinkin bout usin it/
    maybe grab my camera and start youtubin it/
    watch my fuckin cap pop brains and blood shower over my laptop/
    my fault i aint tryna make yall uneasy/
    life of a hood nigga at times i feel sleezy/
    remember when i saw my first dead body i was young and felt queezy/
    didnt tell my mom shit jus told her i wasnt sleepy/
    had visions of him gettin out the ally and chokin me now aint that creepy/
    now im jus twistin a blunt this niggas shit is got hella stems and real seedy/
    guess ima wait to hear the sirens they cant be too far/
    killed this nigga in his house and forgot to put gas in my car/
    im sure his neighbors heard the gun i emptied the clip/
    purposely left the silencer behind im done wit this shit/
    Last edited by Ace_of_Fenix; June 11th, 2009 at 05:10 AM

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    Re: Late nite thots

    get 2 links of feedback or this'll get closed next time I see it.

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    Re: Late nite thots

    aight i got it now
    Last edited by Ace_of_Fenix; June 11th, 2009 at 07:11 AM

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    Re: Late nite thots

    this was cool but you could really tell it was freestyle but you kept it together just couple things you can work on like your emotion and structure, your delivery and what not but it was good and you kept to the topic really well it was a good read
    return the feed
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