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    Big Ass Chain

    Heavy piece around the neck
    the price of the many lives that died
    every diamond was a guy subject to homocide
    yet we buy with near sight eyes
    spend some g's and say your fly.
    dropout rates go sky high
    if you know then tell me why
    they came along
    her house was gone
    into the air i stare while money is being thrown into the
    midst of the unknown
    you make it rain it on satan
    he's smilin and he's waitin
    for the money that you wastin
    to be turned into a demonstration
    right, those carrots make your grill shine brighter
    i known someone who wouldve died for a carrot
    but he was killed by the lighter.
    the fires not so hot when you put ice around
    so we hide our insecurities behind the jewelry.
    crumble the receipt, throw it away and call it
    victory.

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    Re: Big Ass Chain

    this was cool but for any real feed back you need 2 links or this will get closed....
    ummm the vocab was below average, your structure was really off the flow kinda went with it but some of the lines were stretched the topic was good and followed but the flow was kinda off in parts and your figurative language wasn't really there other than that keep writing

    return the feed
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-400511.html
    As i listen to these demons and lookin for a reason for my continuous breathin and a purpose of my xistence

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    Re: Big Ass Chain

    I don't want to be a writer
    i want to be a rapper
    yall words don't flow right because y'all are being choked by grammer
    i know it's hard to fathom that someone of my stature
    could blow the world away with minimal effort
    but that's my intent and i don't need your consent
    feed if you please but the day will come where you will barely reach my knees.

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