5 bars due morrow. check!!
casanova.
s3oul
5 bars due morrow. check!!
check.
good luck.
yo can just make it like due tonight?? in 2 hours or so.
i'm going out now. you can drop. it's not like i'm gonna read it.
i'll drop when i get back on.
Burn s3oul? Only thing you should be worryin 'bout is burnin your calories ..
I'm hard-mirrored, look at it, it reflects death .. how you gon shatter me?
You weren't 'hot' to begin with, so kid, I suggest ya start somewhere cold
Herd this kid's the type to get hammered ........ at angry hardware stores
He wins in a game of 'squirrel' , with his dirty mouth full of nuts
Like an emo with no tolerance, won't make it past the first cut
The outcome's lookin grave like cemetery, close to gettin ya ass doomed
Nova couldn't get the upper hand like midgets participating in a classroom
Y'all wonder why he always leaves and returns, your cover's full blown
Bitch always dissappears like kids at adoption clinics cuz he never wants to get owned
10
y do i bother?
bla quick 1 minute verse.
cuz i'm dope. don't duck the weigh-in,
man u got that CRAZY style. u know.. nobody knows what the fuck ur sayin.
u tried ur best. but damn u'll lose,
..cuz Soul Caliber is soo bad he made the videogame receive bad reviews.
shorten it up. ..u take a gay stance on shit,
u can't win when ur lines stretch EVEN MORE than waistbands on Chrit.
UR NOT IMPROVING! u've been wack this whole season.
so u've got verses like black holes.. they suck in a load of shit for no reason.
it'd take two lines to get ya man hung,
..SO JUST WATCH AS I FUCKING EAT SOUL LIKE I'M SHANG TSUNG.
yeaaa mannn
Vote = Casa
I think his nameplay took this battle...Soul, you got the right concepts and your wording is improving, you've definately elevated, I could tell by that verse, pretty good...
He wins in a game of 'squirrel' , with his dirty mouth full of nuts
Like an emo with no tolerance, won't make it past the first cut
The outcome's lookin grave like cemetery, close to gettin ya ass doomed
Nova couldn't get the upper hand like midgets participating in a classroom
Y'all wonder why he always leaves and returns, your cover's full blown
Bitch always dissappears like kids at adoption clinics cuz he never wants to get owned
Those bars were pretty good...just work on your wording and originality, I've seen all those concepts used before, and better...but you definately got the right idea now...just keep practising and elevating dude...
u tried ur best. but damn u'll lose,
..cuz Soul Caliber is soo bad he made the videogame receive bad reviews.
shorten it up. ..u take a gay stance on shit,
u can't win when ur lines stretch EVEN MORE than waistbands on Chrit.
it'd take two lines to get ya man hung,
..SO JUST WATCH AS I FUCKING EAT SOUL LIKE I'M SHANG TSUNG.
That 1rst and last bar was sick nameplay...good shit Casa.
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
thx. upp.
The outcome's lookin grave like cemetery, close to gettin ya ass doomed
Nova couldn't get the upper hand like midgets participating in a classroom
vs
UR NOT IMPROVING! u've been wack this whole season.
so u've got verses like black holes.. they suck in a load of shit for no reason.
it'd take two lines to get ya man hung,
..SO JUST WATCH AS I FUCKING EAT SOUL LIKE I'M SHANG TSUNG.
s3oul had some good punches. your concepts are gettin up but you still gotta execute with more follow through.
Casa just had better concepts all around and name play was tight. the closer was extremely effective. good wording...
v/ Casa
RTF:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...035/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...913/index.html
Damn S3oul came way nice in this one. His punches were sick none were really played. However Casa just had that fire in his verse and the Shang Tsung line/Black hole line were killer.
Vote Casaa
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...828/index.html
^^^RTF bitches
u tried ur best. but damn u'll lose,
..cuz Soul Caliber is soo bad he made the videogame receive bad reviews.
it'd take two lines to get ya man hung,
..SO JUST WATCH AS I FUCKING EAT SOUL LIKE I'M SHANG TSUNG.
^^^lol i like dat
vs
The outcome's lookin grave like cemetery, close to gettin ya ass doomed
Nova couldn't get the upper hand like midgets participating in a classroom
ima go wit casa on dis 1 s3oul u had a decent verse some of ya shit didnt ryhme 2 me tho
v/casa
vote cas
better punches...soul had some decent shit but a few of his punches
where not hard at all like the ish about the hardware store....
cas was consistant on the other hand.....had some pretty good ideas
flipped them nicely and stayed consistant thru the hole verse
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