Paparazzi

[Hermn As]

First drop in awhile
To the instrumental: The Calm by Drake

This shits amazing
It’s all fun and games staring out the window of a plane
Security at your left revising the decision for the exit
Not knowing the description of the crowd they will face
What will we make of this attention we have gained?
Turn it into something subliminal or into its own fame..?
I ask myself at times is it worth it to maintain
The feelings of the fans the emoticons’ and this game
We play it every day even though it may be cruel
We act like two year olds just getting home from school
We turn it on and exit out the door face the flashing lights……
Lie to them all and smile like it’s not a shame…to speak of words that in your mind will remain...
Yeah…it’s ridiculous how close you come to the cameras
The closer you gradually remain forward to the knife
Catholicism believes that addiction is a sin
Love should not be but publicity makes it addictive
Attending church everyday it just isn’t the same way
Getting photographed at your pew
There comes a line
When respecting God is hard for you…
That’s when you tell them all to leave
Now you have anger management and it’s all over magazines
Your life needs a lease
Seven needles found in your car
By the Nevada State Police…..
You’re so fed up with….your wife don’t want a baby
But you want a child so you see kids saying adopt me
Now you kidnapping….
Pictures taken of you with three kids fuck the PAPARAZZI………
Isn’t it amazing NOW how shit so beautiful it should be wearing a crown
Then mess all up and turn right upside down….
Yeah
And the weather so clearly told me promote me
And find that sun….
Or become that one...So I tried to progress and slowly I became
Something that I’ve developed to become insane…
The cameras…..first you love them then you hate them
Poke at the celebs lets lie about them then we’ll rate them
They invade onto you catch you off guard like them Nazis
It’s like a raid or a match its true it’s hard to dodge the paparazzi….
Why do we go so crazy and fight do drugs and pills
Paparazzi don’t maybe they might treat you like a rug and kill….

They kill man….

[Hermn As]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...186/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...340/index.html

[The Incredible Hulk]

This was dreadful...stop being a dick..

also his feed links are fake.....just crappy feed so he could post this...

[Hermn As]

I say again you dont go through my profile and stalk me....do you?? by the way your suppost to drop feed but if you feel like being a dick go ahead and talk nobodys really reading what your sayin anyways...

[Oranges]

Getting photographed at your pew
There comes a line
When respecting God is hard for you…
That’s when you tell them all to leave
Now you have anger management and it’s all over magazines

this was ok. the rest was really a kind of odd scheme and flow. many parts were stretched while other lines were too short. work on the structure and length of your lines a bit more man. Stay up, and hit me back.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...340/index.html

[Hermn As]

thanks man i will

[143]

The way you have this i can see what you are talking about but seems that you are doing more of a speaking piece. The flow was off like swinging from one end to the other like Oranges said. Couldn't figure the rhymes skeme but I like where you ere going with the topic. Work on the structure and slow down with the process and you have it. Peace