Appreciate the feed.
Upp4
Let's get some more votes.
iWin
Stylez 905
Appreciate the feed.
Upp4
Let's get some more votes.
If I leave feed on your shit, return the favour...
Seriously, cmon people.
I'll RTF for christ sakes...
If I leave feed on your shit, return the favour...
Stylez bars where more direct & harder hitting due to the structure..I was liking the vocab from I win..the concepts where kinda all over the place & the direction wasn't exactly on point which made some his punches miss..
so I have stylez edging with harder more direct punches.
RTF.
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Upp4
Lets get some more votes in here and get this closed.
If I leave feed on your shit, return the favour...
First off, when it’s you and me ..ain’t none of that gangsta shit cool, cuz see……
I bet Stylez the type of dude that’s ‘tipped off more feds’ than gratuity!
doesn't really make sense but I see what you were trying to do...
I hate faggots.. and Stylez’ bukkake epicals are sort of NOT incredible
Since ur omni-sexual, I’ma beet you tin fold like crafting aluminum origami vegetables
you execution didn't make sense lol but again I see what you were trying to do, you just ruined it with the metaphor, but the wordplay was ok, haven't seenthat in a while...
Vs
You ain't a winner, you're a loser, and ya rhymes ain't nice
When I made this thread, the poll should've had my name twice
a played concept but a nice flip, I lol'ed...
It was a mistake to accept this battle, cause now your records ruined
Next time you use a name like iWin ..... you better do it
this was simple, but still it hit, I liked it lol
Overall: This was a pretty weak battle, those lines I quoted were the only decent ones in yall's verses, and Stylez had the better 2...so...even tho IWin is gonna get DQ'ed for posting the link to this battle in the chat, ima still vote for...
V/ Stylez
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
V/Stylez
cause of his finisher bar..but you could've done much better...iWin had good concepts but he failed to execute most properly..a lil focus on the structuring of the punches would've got you this win.
Appreciate the feed peeps.
Let's get a couple more votes in here and get this thing closed.
If I leave feed on your shit, return the favour...
Upp5
C'mon, a couple more votes...
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RTF Both of You: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...761/index.html
IWIN
First off, when it’s you and me ..ain’t none of that gangsta shit cool, cuz see……
I bet Stylez the type of dude that’s ‘tipped off more feds’ than gratuity!
iight
My conscious rift is fertile.. Stylez looks like he bites every punch from infomercials
But beware, cuz your next flip could land you underground like a fuckin’ Ninja Turtle
iight
This guy’s shootin’ airballs and bricks – each time costs a lot…… ….But,
I'll will have Stylez ‘fed up with when’, till he starts tryin’ to eat time off the clock (Win)
iffy to me
I hate faggots.. and Stylez’ bukkake epicals are sort of NOT incredible
Since ur omni-sexual, I’ma beet you tin fold like crafting aluminum origami vegetables
cool
After life is gone in ya, I’ll hide ya disfigured body’s insides in Hungria
While your corpse’s site is monitored, I got your parents worried sick like hypochondria
na
vs
STYLES
Having a name like iWin is pretty contradicting
You've gotta elevate yourself to achieve the outcome you're predicting
cool
iWin, uLose, this was really no challenge
iCan pick apart your writtens, and leave you to scavenge
na
I'm a monster compared to you, compared to me your just a pipsqueak
Your feces will never beat me ... simply because your shits weak
na
You ain't a winner, you're a loser, and ya rhymes ain't nice
When I made this thread, the poll should've had my name twice
iight
It was a mistake to accept this battle, cause now your records ruined
Next time you use a name like iWin ..... you better do it
iight
ok this was a okay battle nun funny, mostly just straight hard dissing, but ima have to say styles you come up a little short to me this time. so ima have to give it to IWIN cause i think his verse was a lil harser
v/ IWin
Last edited by C.Wrighter; December 18th, 2009 at 07:39 PM
i'll be returnin' the favor to all after i get a few more posts
thanks for the feed everyone
Cmon peeps 2 more votes tops.
If I leave feed on your shit, return the favour...
i like iwins stuff. i felt it was harder and he killed him with those aluminum oragami vegetables. 905 was cool but i feel fell off midway so i say iwin won this 1.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...917/index.html
vote stylez/ came better with better personals i kind of got lost in iwins battle.
Really good battle another then that
need me to break it down let me know, hit me up with a rtf in battles you see my name at
RTF i gotaa couple at the top..
Overall this wass a decent battle. iWin had some decent lines, i felt the conepts were a lil simply worded, but the flow was cool throughout and made it an easy reaad. Nothing too hard hitting though. I felt like Stylez had a lot crisper wording and had his shit more directly aimed. The "you better do it' line was real dope to me for some reason... not insaanely clever but real direct and nice play off the name. I got Stylez takin this one here.
vote = Styles 905
rtf: alien vs mc kid, alien vs emforce
C L [A] S H
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