Dude...im not gonna lie..in this battle, NBA came more personal, his nameplay and punches were just off this hizzle, and Swift with you it seemed less ya dig, but elevate up cuz i cant vote anyway so thats what it is
Dude...im not gonna lie..in this battle, NBA came more personal, his nameplay and punches were just off this hizzle, and Swift with you it seemed less ya dig, but elevate up cuz i cant vote anyway so thats what it is
uppin
NIGHTMARES
you was desperate to battle.. what makes you think you'll destory-me?
cuz 1 punch get 'shift done quick.. like good employees..
Ok np flip...decent punch 3/5
Im givin him 'tips'.. so on nba's knowledge this bum-is-rich..
call me Kanye,... the way im cuttin in front-of-swift'
Lol this made me chuckle but i've seen it before! 2/5
I mastered this game-of-text.. shud slap the person who said this gays'a-vet..
and your initials suit you well.. cuz to us your just a-'s,s'
Fresh concept...even tho the set up is stretched, this is my fav bar so far. 4/5
this bitch's voice aint heard..i got sound-kid..my skills is well rounded
your 14 homie. so wen i knock u out!.. its only right to say u got 'grounded'
Ok the concept is played & your flip didnt really do much for it. 2/5
No one will be rootin-for-shift... cuz my bars is cookin-this-kid..
so its ironic you hate 'letsbeef'.. as soon as i joined you was lookin for it!
Nah... 0/5
Chopping tracks and bodies.. so watch me slay-him-thin
only time girls got there hands on 'shift' is when they drivin' away-from-him
Haha... 3/5
Total: 14/25
Quit frontin’ like a G, ‘cause your thug status is minimal
You could rape Miss Demeanor, and you still wouldn’t be considered a criminal
Weak... 1/5
If it came down to eatin’ a man’s ass, -NBA's tongue would be in it to win it
But if it came down to eatin’ pussy, he wouldn’t get hard if it had Viagra in it
No No No... 0/5
He's never fucked his bitch, let alone given her kisses
When this woman beater throws punches, is the only time that he feels misses
Meh ok... 2/5
This lame raps wack as fuck, yet he claims to be dope
Cocaine addicts wouldn’t bump his shit, if he titled it “LISTEN FOR FREE COKE”
Wack... 0/5
When it comes to spittin', shit's the only thing that you’re worth
Your wack rhymes could mail you to the Arctic, but they still ain’t sendin’ you north
Not feeling this... 1/5
4/25
Well despite what others may thing, I believe that NBA won this by a wide margin. He came with fresh concepts and although his structure may have been off, his punches made up for it. No hate...just enjoyed NBA's verse more!
v/NBA
I dont think Wiz's vote counts...it really wasn't legit!Originally Posted by Swift Shiftee
I dont think Wiz's vote counts...it really wasn't legit!
Nba, your first couple bars were pretty good, could have been done better still but were cool concepts n shit, but ones like the closer didnt work as they didnt read both ways, like if they had their hands on shift, (cuz they are driving away), how would their hands still actually be on shift? if you read it both ways it doesnt totally connect, just a bit of crit, either way was a solid verse overall, felt the first couple bars were your best.. Swift, I see you reaching for concepts a bit more then in the past, but they are still not quite there, most are played out/old concepts, try to think of stuff that is as unique/original as possible to keep away from using played concepts, granted everyone runs into them but just about everyone of yours was pretty played out (viagra, cocaine/bump), I see your shooting to elevate, just keep at it dude, just wasnt enough to take the W in this battle, Nba had the only couple bars worth mentioning and just had an all around better verse..
VOTE: NBA
Holy shit, good looks Gwap.
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you was desperate to battle.. what makes you think you'll destory-me?
cuz 1 punch get 'shift done quick.. like good employees..
Im givin him 'tips'.. so on nba's knowledge this bum-is-rich..
call me Kanye,... the way im cuttin in front-of-swift'
No one will be rootin-for-shift... cuz my bars is cookin-this-kid..
so its ironic you hate 'letsbeef'.. as soon as i joined you was lookin for it!
vs
He's never fucked his bitch, let alone given her kisses
When this woman beater throws punches, is the only time that he feels misses
Hmm...NBA got some nice hits in there and some ok nameplays. I've seen Swift come a lot harder than this and definitely a lot more creative than this tbh, in this battle he didn't really come that creative or hard.
v/ NBA
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