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can someone tell me what to improve on...i will appreciate it..
anyone wana help a rookie
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Sorry about the delay, didn't happen to see this until now.
One thing I see about your verses are the flow gets sketchy often. If you used multies, I feel your flow would tighten up and get better. Some of your personals seem a bit played as they only focus on names, try researching some of their other stuff (as you did in the King battle) but make your punches more solid.
You definitely have potential, just keep working on it.
I have a problem. I keep making statements, how can I prevent that? And how would you describe a metaphore?
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I also dont really know how to come up with concepts? Could it be anything or does the person I battle against needs to be involved with it.
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How do i make my 1-2 punch creative and with sting
Courtesy of Dictionary.com
Metaphor - a figure of speech in which a term or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable in order to suggest a resemblance
Example: “A mighty fortress is our God.”
Concepts can come from anything... Wording it to pertain to your opponent is the keyOriginally Posted by Bos
Find a solid concept, make it pertain to your opponent. The best thing to do is write a verse against your opponent, identify your best bar/punch and use that.Originally Posted by Mackzimuz Rayge
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Aight, thanks dude
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Not a problem.
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Can I contact you anytime here? Im part of a crew which helps me great, but it is also useful to hear others advice.
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Yes
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