Jeffry vs. 9thwonder

[W]

v/ 9thWonder

9thWonder - opener was a good personal and punch, although a little stretched. your next two bars were dope, but it would have been better if you tied in Hardy somehow to 'Jeff .. TNA superstar' I got the wordplay w/ the free throw, shoot foul, but I didn't understand the punch.. the Viagra line was lol, and your closer was meh..

Jeff - opener was good, but incredibly played (even though it was a nameplay) I lol'd at the Vinzr line, but it wasn't great or anything. I didn't like the next two lines, and your closer was good, but you went from a basketball reference setup and switched it to baseball.

500+ won't make you a Survivor in this battle the vets will seal your death
A loss is your reality ... TV castaways only time you'll CBS votes involving Jeff

bar of the battle.

[Joe Boston]

9th Wonder

Wins against Fuktup, Mac, The_King, to defeat you I don't see the drama
You've run through so many young boys on RB you should change your name to Jeffry Dahmer
lol good personal setup here and i like the reference on the punch

500+ won't make you a Survivor in this battle the vets will seal your death
A loss is your reality ... TV castaways only time you'll CBS votes involving Jeff
ok not bad w/p

Claim to be slangin' hot lines, but your punches read like a blooper bar
The only Jeff in possession of dope product ... is the TNA superstar
ok cool reference

After these 3 bars my dude just felt ur concepts fell off no hate

Jeff:

i play n run wit open triggers, aint nowhere for u to hide
after i kill this cat, we'll no this pussy wont have 9 lives
ok not bad

you cheatin to win, homie u no that ain't right
diggin up history on me? got ur fellow countryman vinzr for you to ghostwrite
lol ok personal


I run full court press, u trapped in the zone, makin u take a time out
becus when the bases r loaded in the bottom of the 9th u no hell strikeout
not a bad reference on the n/p

Jeff u also feel off on some of ur concepts

Yo when it comes down to it SmokinandFlowin please break down ur votes cuz no hate to Jeffrey I got 9th taking this i just thought the 3 bars i quoted of his he had better references and np attempts.

V/9th wonder

[9thwonder]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...60/index2.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...566/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...772/index.html

[9thwonder]

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[9thwonder]

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[9thwonder]

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[Mac]

Wins against Fuktup, Mac, The_King, to defeat you I don't see the drama
You've run through so many young boys on RB you should change your name to Jeffry Dahmer
500+ won't make you a Survivor in this battle the vets will seal your death
A loss is your reality ... TV castaways only time you'll CBS votes
involving Jeff

vs

you cheatin to win, homie u no that ain't right
diggin up history on me? got ur fellow countryman vinzr for you to ghostwrite

ok not a really weak battle but i'll say that 9th got the win.. first time i see jeff losin by noobs.. jks.
9th came bit more solid n consistant with his punchs.. jeff the cat 9 lives is bit played imo..
v/9th no hate niggs

[9thwonder]

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[Alphabet]

i got 9th just barley edging the win here with better concepts. it was hella close. both need to work on there wording and 9th needs to work on shortining his bars. jeffry needs to work on being less statementish and trying to flip his concepts better for more impact. keep at it

[#PrimeTime]

FL is gettin whack as fuck, the only vote that made sense was Alphabets.

Alpha u my nigga.

ur alright.

[Fatal.]

9th wonder's best bars:
Wins against Fuktup, Mac, The_King, to defeat you I don't see the drama
You've run through so many young boys on RB you should change your name to Jeffry Dahmer

500+ won't make you a Survivor in this battle the vets will seal your death
A loss is your reality ... TV castaways only time you'll CBS votes involving Jeff

Jeffry's best bars:
you cheatin to win, homie u no that ain't right
diggin up history on me? got ur fellow countryman vinzr for you to ghostwrite

I run full court press, u trapped in the zone, makin u take a time out
becus when the bases r loaded in the bottom of the 9th u no hell strikeout

Summary:
Alright, 9th wonder was strong with his punches, he had pretty good wording, and some personals. Jeff, you went a lot with the name plays..some hit, some didn't. but based on how strong each of your lines were, i'd have to give it to 9th for slightly stronger punches and personals, no hate.

v/9th

[9thwonder]

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[9thwonder]

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[#PrimeTime]

u over-upp'd.