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Thread: Excide- Freeverse

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Excide's Avatar
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    Excide- Freeverse

    [video=youtube;uQWE073b7uk]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQWE073b7uk[/video]

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    Re: Excide- Freeverse

    hey that shit was dope
    fav line was that addict/anne frank line..
    yeah I really cant say nothing
    lyricism was good, flow and delivery sounded confident
    content wise was cool.. this was a solid track.
    its missing something though - cant think of it right now but if I do
    ill let u know


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    Re: Excide- Freeverse

    Flow was forced and not really feeling the delivery and stuff on the track. I liked the lyrics throughout some nice bars spit out

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    Re: Excide- Freeverse

    Edit in your 2 links or I will have to close this thread. The rules thread is stickied at the top of this forum. Thank you.

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    Re: Excide- Freeverse

    I liked the flow, but you don't sound motivated.

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    Re: Excide- Freeverse

    More emotion is needed. Beats pretty cool. You almost got something going, but your voice is lacking a little energy. some solid lines, but the way you deliver it could make them impact harder.

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