^ It's kinda like a two for one deal. Write one, you get one back.
^ It's kinda like a two for one deal. Write one, you get one back.
“Those whom life does not cure death will. The world is quite ruthless in selecting between the dream and the reality, even where we will not. Between the wish and the thing the world lies waiting.”
**does the moonwalk with his hof award stuffed down his pants**
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http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...=the+strangler
One of my favorite pieces i wrote i dropped about 9 years agoo here dark tale
Awesome. I shall definitely take the opportunity to do that. Thanks to you and @Jukon for the green light!
This poem has been slept on. As a fellow fan of Poe, I'll definitely check it out and offer some feedback.
I'll get around to reading and feeding in a bit
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@Jukon ...I already fed your pieces but, I'll read it again. I remember it for being really relatable. I was impressed at how accurately you captured those thoughts that we all think and translated them into written form. Every line was in sync with the one before And after it. It just all fit and fell into place perfectly. It was just smoothly worded and laid out. The real skill was in how you made It seem so effortless when we all know It probably took a minute just trying to figure out how to lace it. It was really an epic piece bro.
Here's my choice: Her Gnostic Gospel
I wrote this piece as part of the June Writer of the Month Contest.
The reason I feel like it is probably my best work is because I didn't really write it -- she did. It's like everything I wanted to say about her just flowed through me. I didn't even have to think about it. Every line meant something. Every stanza had depth and was layered. I could break it all down. More impressively, I still find new meaning in it every time I read it. Ultimately, I Just feel like it was a complete story. It was enthralling and mysterious. And, I didn't cheat myself or the reader -- I feel it was a full expirence . It was exactly what I wanted to be. If that makes sense...?
Why was my piece closed
anyone wanna quick collab?
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“Those whom life does not cure death will. The world is quite ruthless in selecting between the dream and the reality, even where we will not. Between the wish and the thing the world lies waiting.”
this is an oldie, not my favourite, but still makes me smile
http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...he-Death-of-Me
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I remember reading this. It's beautiful.
"I thought this was good, maybe my favorite "As one man's inspiration is another's destruction She can raise a living nation as easily as deduct one."
"This is really great, also I like the image and colors. "crafted in hate with a magical taste for fantastical space".
@cz, thank you so much for dropping in om, and for leaving links. However, this feed here, (which is for two pieces)...well...lol...you get it right? A little more insight from you would be greatly appreciated.
We all want quality feed on our pieces.
With that in mind, we should leave the type of feed for others, that we'd like others, to leave for us.
One and a half lines, with half of that being a quote, doesn't cut it.
So dig a little deeper my friend, that way,
others will dig deeper when feeding your written work too.
We're always checking for quality feed.
A few more genuine thoughts on those two pieces would be appreciated.
Last edited by Emily; March 6th, 2016 at 11:55 PM
tiny feed indicates a tiny penis
I'm a depressed happy cunt. Don't fuck with me. I love you, but I'm crazy.[/I]
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