Originally Posted by
Dia
punches? nothing portland is a blazer, pinned up against me you're subject to an early fate.
cuz after this, you'll be able to wave at god, and fist bump him when ur at the pearly gate.
This was pretty mild. Nothing really witty about it, unless I'm missing a personal.
dying? plan it! because you're about to take a casualty, in your verses, the fallacies spread.
rich is gay with strings attached, guys always plugging into port, like their galaxies dead.
Kind of stretched, so the excessive wording takes away from the sting. Dope concept though, still lands.
this's a get rich quick scheme, was going to wait till friday, but I'll eject this herb now.
this is the farthest your going to get, usually rich have `3` of everything, except the `third` round.
This was a pretty lack luster nameflip. Your excessive wording + a bland concept is not the equation for success.
he's soft as fuck with punches, this dick needs Cialis, because nothing he's bringing is hard.
you called knowp a janitor, bitch custodians, aint suppose to be washing & hanging ya art.
Not feeling the set up. Pretty played. But I like that your attempting to double punch. The quote flip was poorly executed though. If your going to flip a line...it needs to be doper then the one your flipping.
you losing this, is gospil, only thing that makes you god like, is getting crucified by uppers.
you won't make it to the finals, with your bars...
you won't even make it in front of the semi's, like pussies trying to commit suicide by truckers.
Holy sheep shit bat man. This bar was stretched. The part I bolded could have been nixed, as it adds nothing to the Bar. The ending concept was pretty good though, but excessive wording limits it to being a jab.