Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@Kill Spree
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Kill Spree
Last edited by Phalanx; January 3rd, 2023 at 10:56 AM
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Toy w/ me?
N' Im going for the glock quick-- Aim it sideways, Tru' soulja when the shots spit
Yeah, I'll pull it, twist it, then its game over when I BopItTM
Sorry I’m late
Boooooyyy…
These hands’ll end lives, yeah my fists’ll smother the chud
I’ll punch fatal he’s no longer breathing & his body is covered in blood
V.Spree// battle could go either way, I had to read it a few times to catch the name flip, it was decent
Not even a hate vote but fatal is forced its ull not ill
Thought bopit was very well executed but bopit as the ending kinda felt rated PG lol
Overall going with phal here
The toy w/me bop it concept was nice, gun bars can get risky unless you word it right- which you did. Cool bar. Spree the NP for pha-til fatal is good, not forced at all in my opinion however I do think you could have made it stung it a bit more. Honestly this could either way depending on your preference towards name play or violence. V/Phal good spar here
my vote is for spree.. i'll" did make sense... and so did his punch.. made more sense than phal's ... phal punch just fell short...
v- spree
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
The bop it metaphor was pretty accurate and gave nice imagery but I felt as a punchline it fell a little flat. I liked the fatal word play and hit a bit harder as a punch for me.
V/spree
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Would love if you could drop a vote
Fatal was nice, bro. Good shit. I'm taking the DQ since Daylyt apparently beat me to the punch. Good luck in the finals.
Kill Spree wins 3-2
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